Mt. Olympus By FB
The Threatening Lightning and the roars of Zeus,
Swimming in The Waves of Poseidon, there was no use.
Bottom of the mountain, a rocky cave.
Upon the peak, great gods lay.
So powerful and great.
Ruling all of earth, they never get a break.
Hidden and secret, never seen by a human soul,
You can’t see them when they're watching,
Even when you got that goal....
you must have out a lot of work into making this rhyme because it is very extravagant. chuck norris. (It is a really good poem.) tinker bell
ReplyDeleteit must of taken you a long time it make it rhyme. chuck norris (it is a good poem)n tinker bell
ReplyDeleteI liked this poem because it describes the land in the form of Greek gods. It has the discrete feeling that they are watching all the time O.O
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the theme of your poem and i like how the rymes in your poem flows.
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I really liked the poem I think it's awesome I agree with Chuck Norris a.k.a Ethan that it might have taken a long time to rhyme
ReplyDeleteit's a bit stalker-ish that they watch you all the time but rhyming poems are hard to make!! great job F.B (whoever you are)!!!
ReplyDeleteThe way you created your excellent poem was interesting. You used powerful adjectives, This poem is really good!
ReplyDeleteyour poem is cool. the rhyming makes the poem cool
ReplyDeleteAwsome poem I liek how you made it rhyme and you set the mood...... it felt like I was there! :D
ReplyDeleteI like it because it features Greek gods and goddesses. and I really like Greek gods and goddesses.
ReplyDeleteinteresting rhyming
ReplyDeleteCool poem, I like how it rhyms.
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