I awake to the sound of my growling stomach. As I get out of my small piece of carpeting, I walk across the room and see my brother who looks so quiet and peaceful. I let him sleep. I go outside and scavenge through the forest and grab some dry wood, which I take back to the house and make a fire. Using the fire, I start boiling some water. As the bubbles start to grow and pop, it wakes up Jonah my little brother.
He gets up and ever so gracefully walks to me and asks what I am cooking. I say to him, “The old meat from a week ago.” In response he gives out a cheer. I grab some small bowls, the only ones we have, and pour a bit into each bowl. I give one to Jonah and immediately he starts scooping it into his mouth. I tell him to have a good day. I walk to the door and put on my tattered jacket.
I go out to the village and everyone is beginning to wake up. Today is the day that we plan to show that we are not alone. Today is the day that we show that everyone is equal and that we will not be shunned ever again. I grab my small cap and walk to the garage on the far side of the village. Along the way I meet a few shopkeepers and I greet them. Once I get to the hanger I open it and I see Kent, my second in hand. Without him I don’t know who I would be, because of him this plan would have never worked. I exclaim, “Today is the day,” and we open up two large steel doors that like a sloth, crumble into the sides.
There in front of us there is a large shiny machine with sleek under cuts. The sun reflects off of it and its wings are as soft as silk. In the front there are two places for a harness to go. There is a joystick near the beak of the machine and it has a silicon tail. Grabbing on to the wing with my hand, I pull it out of the hanger on its two slick black wheels.
As we draw it outside, everyone begins to come to the middle of the town. I spot Jonah in the front row, I run up and hug him. Slowly the crowd settles down and I begin talking, “Good morning everyone. We are here to address something that has been a concern for some time. Roana has been ruling over us and been pushing us around. We are here to show that we are important and not expendable and that we have great minds like them. We will not go down without a fight.”
With loud cheers being emitted from the crowd I introduce our glimmering creation, “Here I show to you the Treker.” Kent grabs my hand as we point at the sleek framed bird-like creature with long magnificent wings. Then Kent comes to the front and with a shout says, “Roana will fall today!” Kent and I grabbed the machine and begin wheeling it to the air strip, as we pack what little food is left in the town.
Kent and I get into the front of the machine with us stacked on top of each other. We strap ourselves in and grab onto the small stick with which to control the creature. A push of a button and the wings began to flap effortlessly and we begin to move forward. I grip the controls and pull the creature off the ground. The wings flap in entrancing patterns as the silver bird soars above the clouds gracefully flying into the heavens and swooping down again into patterns. Above me Kent tells me that I need to keep going straight to get to Roana.
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ReplyDeleteI liked this story, because it relates to apartheid to the people whoa are in district 12 in the hunger games but in an awesome way. By the way Ethan why did you review your own story?!
ReplyDeletethanks and I deleted it!
DeleteI think this story was good because it related to apartheid in an awesome way like with the people in district 12. Also Ethan, why did you REVIEW your own story (unless it isn't you >.<, O.O, :D, :C, :), :O, >:D, >:o
ReplyDeleteNice story! I'd like to see what happens next! It links to our religion about expendable and it also relates to the most epic book ever, THE HUNGER GAMES!!!!! it's like they are district 12 and Roana is the capitol.... Anyway! you should continue this! By the way it's weird to comment on your own things...
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment and i am going to continue
DeleteI like how you seemed to capture the fact that people were starving in their town, and how they wanted to be free. I have to say, reminds me of the Hunger Games!
ReplyDeleteGood job.
yes I got some of my inspiration from the hunger games
Deleteit reminds me a lot about the Hunger Games (poor people, expendableness)
ReplyDeleteit's pretty descriptive too.
well it is also religion based but it is very moving.
Deletethank you to everyone who commented on my story it is really appreciated!!!
DeleteI really liked the story. For some reason it reminds me of the aprthied or racism. Also the picture in my head was so cleear. I would love to hear more on it.
ReplyDeleteI like your story and it does remind me of the hunger games
ReplyDeleteIt sorta is like the hunger games but it is shorter and thats why i like it i hate lloooonnnnnggggg books
DeleteIt remided me of the hunger games in the sense that they don't have much food and that a different place considers them expendable but of corse they are not. :D
ReplyDeletegreat story it really speaks to me
ReplyDeleteGreat job Ethan. I highly enjoyed this story but I do believe that you should make it more descriptive but other then that I loved it. Are you going to make it a story?
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I think the story is awesome!
ReplyDeleteI liked this story a lot! It was really good!
ReplyDeleteawesome story! it reminds me of the hunger games lol
ReplyDeletemy suggestion is the bird
ReplyDeleteGood story i want to here the rest.
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