The sunflower grew in the morning dew Petals, the crimson flame so beautiful that God is to blame shining yellows & crimson reds alive pollen attracts bees from the hive flower follows the sun on earth’s surrounding run
Thanks for sharing your poem. I noticed that when you read it aloud, it seemed to burst with colour! It is alive with colourful images. I especially like the words, "crimson reds alive", "crimson flame" and "shining yellows".
Thanks for sharing your poem. I noticed that when you read it aloud, it seemed to burst with colour! It is alive with colourful images. I especially like the words, "crimson reds alive", "crimson flame" and "shining yellows".
ReplyDeletei loved how you wrote with colour and it made your poem come to light and burst out of the screen and let me imagine it :) this was a really good poem
ReplyDeleteI love the colors in the poem!!!
ReplyDeleteSame here it's so cool.
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